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KOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR!

Die Bitch

xKore responds:

no u die

what?

It is hard to believe that you're the same guy that makes all that great orchestral music after hearing this.

Need some improvements to do

First of all, the track has a lot of clipping (that little burst sound whenever the bass plays) you should take a look at your mixer and balance your instrument's volume, don't let any bar get red or it will cause clipping.

You should try add more variation to the melody because you're basically playing the same melody again, define some structure. Make your other synths do something different rather than following the melody. Make some harmony with the other instruments and i will guarantee you that it will sound better.

But hey , this has a lot of potential man. Just work more on your tracks :)

Awesome

Ruben -Acid Paradox-

GDibsy responds:

Thanks for the feedback man, I'll be sure to take all of it into consideration when I edit the track! :D

It's good

The track is really nice , i liked all the synths. I just think that the piano is really repetitive, it never stops or changes pattern. I think is the solution for this is a) make a variation with the piano or b) add some vocals like you said on your description; it will help a lot to make it sound more "unrepetitive".

But everything is really nice man

Awesome

Ruben -Acid Paradox-

lol

you and your fucking fast paced beats man, i love them......

It's nice to see you doing stuff like this again , calm beats but still bangers with those crazy arpeggios and vocals.

Sick stuff Matt

Cheers

That snap at 14.....

was just damn sexy. I loved the 8 bit intro too , so bright and clean. The main part of this song (or the drop like most people calls it) was really nice too; I just think that maybe you could add something else like more 8 bit madness that will make the track more full but maybe that's your secret weapon huh??

I really can't say anything else mmmmm but this is a really nice track. Loved the sound quality.

You better not lose this round, i want to have a round with you :3

Cheers

Ruben -Acid-

Rig responds:

I added the 8-bit part mostly as a nod to Suezo, who specializes in 8-bit. Maybe I'll keep it going...who knows? ;)

Pretty Cool

I just think a pad on the background would be awesome because there are some parts were it sounds kinda empty but the beat sounded really good on my speakers.

Awesome

This is well done

The quality is superb in this track. I liked the instruments you chose, they fit pretty well.

I can't really find something else to talk about it, everything is really good.

Awesome

Ruben -Acid Paradox-

Rampant responds:

Thank you!
To be complimented by you is fucking awesome :D

- James

good

For your first thing ever made, it's really good better than my first stuff lol.
The song is straight forward but things keep catchy with that lead. Song gets repetitive after 1 minute, maybe you should play a little bit with the melodies.

Awesome

Ruben -Acid Paradox-

Needs improvement at the end

But this track doesn't deserve a score of 0.83, the intro was really good, pretty classic sounds you are using there. I think you should balance the instrument's volume a little because there are some that are louder than the others.

The ending was kinda mmmmmm predictible, you should do something unexpected, like just let those wobbles go crazy, etc.

But this is really good

Ruben -Acid Paradox-

The anonymous gangbanger of the 21st century.

Ruben @Acid-Paradox

Age 31, Male

Drummer

Ciudad Juarez, Mexico

Joined on 8/29/08

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