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I agree with DJkirb

The beat you used in this track is out of time, for example this is a beat with a 4/4 time stamp the bass drum should start at the first beat and the snare drum should start at the second beat. Your bass drum and snare are starting at the second and third beat respectively, i suggest you that you should fix that as soon as possible because you will start getting bad reviews.

Apart from that it is not that bad as the previous reviews mentioned i wouldn't give a 6 to this just because of a little mistake.

Good luck

Ruben -Acid Paradox-

Nice

I really liked that fast paced beat you used on this track, the synths were pretty classic for the techno genre, you should add more variation to the tracks because sometimes it sounds a little repetitive , which is not wrong but it will help the track to get even better.

Ruben -Acid Paradox-

djresset responds:

okei thanks

It's good but it has some little mistakes

The third note in your lead synth does not fit with the tones you used in the track, otherwise than that i have no other complain. It's rare to see in newgrounds this type of tracks which is good since it gives originality to the artist. I just feel that you could add more stuff unless you wanted to keep it that way to make it more mysterious and dark sounding.

Nice

Ruben -Acid Paradox-

Nice

The instrumental is great, nice arrangement of this song by journey but there are some parts that i don't like with the vocals and im not talking about the clipping or the pops, but it's a personal view though im sure everyone else will love this track.

Nice Track just improve vocals!

hehe i like those bells playing along the guitar

I like this, it fits perfectly for a flash game " a sewers level" for example. About the track, i really like the quality i guess you used FL because it has better quality than reason (unless you rewire it). The track gets better at 2:48 when you do that little breakbeat and change the mood but then you go back to the first beat but with a little "extra". Ending was just.........BANG!!!! "fades out"

Nice Track!

Ruben-Acid Paradox-

Fissile

you don't know what you're talking about.....

I have been hearing your tracks recently and i think that the mastering is really great, makes a nice quality. I personally don't know about the Dubstep genre, the lead synth (the one with distortion) gives the "punchy effect" to this track.

and i can't believe your 17, hehe. Did you study something for this or all has been by yourself?

Awesome

Ruben -Acid Paradox-

Piano :)

Is some awesome, it just makes me relax , one of the most beautiful instruments that i have heard and those pads boost up this " peaceful" Mood.

Great Track

Ruben -Acid Paradox-

RaREaniMoSiTY responds:

Thanks for the review! It means alot :)
Im glad you enjoyed it!

you sure this goes on rap

I think this will fit more on the video game genre or even on the Techno or Dance, because most of hip hop tracks have this Jumpy beat , the track sounds good i just think some notes would be better if they weren't there, but it's your track anyways , you can do whatever you want.

Ruben -Acid Paradox-

Definitely old school

This really reminds me of the music of the 90's, has the classic bass, what i think that sound good, was the piano, it has this crystal quality that makes it even more enjoyable.

Nice

Ruben -Acid Paradox-

Lublub194 responds:

Thanks man! The piano was a tad bit more mellow, but I eq'd it to stand out some more, so I'm glad you noticed it.

I'll make sure to review some of your music!

Thanks for the review!

The anonymous gangbanger of the 21st century.

Ruben @Acid-Paradox

Age 32, Male

Drummer

Ciudad Juarez, Mexico

Joined on 8/29/08

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